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sperarifraai
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since 2003-03-06

Posts 65
Ireland

0 posted 2003-03-06 07:46 AM

Very little wonder from the children's eyes
They use the word loser to fully emphasise
A very tall class wall inevitably to fall

As the lights fail to give answers
And the night she has no answers
To the earth and it's pound sirs
A normality without cares

Lost and lonely are a lot so much
As ideals of vibrant pictures and platforms of glory
A false petistool of life gets late
So many hesitate and dream of such dreams
That aren't meant to be
And dieting and barfing and eating sensibly

But I ask so much
And set myself the task so much
But the love I see
Tells me with no uncertainty
There are no answers honestly
Just hugs most definitely that's all, just hugs

And the world turns
And the state remains
Aspire to fame
Legends to train for big TV
Watching religiously
And I get so dismayed at
Trying to find the right way
To try to see my face in the same way
As people in my gateway

But forgotten love she comes to me
Sheer brilliance in her simplicity
Smiles to me so delicately
Says there's no answers just hugs and kisses
There's no way out doesn't matter
Was never a maze in the first place
Stop seeing yourself with disgrace
Read between the lines of faith
And love she'll come the same way

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-03-06 09:19 AM

Good morning, and Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

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Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-03-06 09:27 AM

I really enjoyed this

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-03-06 09:29 AM

Welcome to Passions! We are a family of kindred spirits who live and breathe poetry!
We share our lives, our views, our feelings, our dreams, our visions...

"Sheer brilliance in her simplicity"---and in your writing as well! Enjoyed this slice of life.

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

sperarifraai
Member

since 2003-03-06

Posts 65
Ireland

4 posted 2003-03-06 09:32 AM

Thank You Brad,

It's good to have some positive feedback

Sperari

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-03-06 10:45 AM

(smiles) Oh Sperari, this is such a heartfelt and haunting debut, sweet friend, I know this feeling ever so well where I know love don't live in my heart anymore yet the TV signals and projections of it keep playing on active rotation, this is powerful, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Sperari, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, you have my proud vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sperari, thank you for sharing!