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Twenty or Less... Know Known
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Words Unleashed minutes That left years Undone And Now bleed Failing Thoughts To stain Tomorrow |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Ah, the power of words: the bitter aftertaste of food for thought... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron... words captured feeling let go the loss of minutes gone words  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wish I'd written this. Lord knows I've lived it.  |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Well said in 20 or less. Enjoyed.  Sunkissed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well said Captain! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Minutes that left years undone... Tight little write here Cpat~ Enjoyed, as always. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I just replied to Mark's poem with the words "Food for thought" and then I read your poem and Mark's reply to you using the same words! Uncanny! ---and those words do apply to your poem as well! Peace, Love, & Light, EA |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
thanks all... reading Mark again on a regular basis reminded me how I enjoyed this form... I appreciate your comments and your taking time to read. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Shucks! I don't know how you people do this. Me? I can't write without being verbose. But, there are soooo many words! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ron - OMG this is amazing!!! I agree with Ed - I practically have half a short story there before I am done . . . awesome job xxoo |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Words pale when left unspoken ... unwritten. Words fail to tell true all I feel. Words alone wont do this justice. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Yep, I'll take sticks and stones anyday. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Hmmmmmm. I like what Janet said. But, I just want to be quiet and think about this and the title. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (03-27-2003 08:12 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Some words do that, words should never be put over a skewer or freeze-dried by any means necessary, that's just my opinion but I feel a valid one surely! (sad sigh) May the words of comfort be a tourniquet to nurse the wounds, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Words ... staining the page speaking the rage setting the stage. Words ... too little ... too late sealing (or stealing) fate. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh and Ron... as always..TY for the inspire... futile as it may be... me muse is not amused with my lame attempts at distilling...still...sometimes I just need the rhymes... ya know? ... yes....you know.... |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Ron, you are so good with words and writing about words..this reminds me of your submission "Failing Words" for Reflections... took me some time to digest this but i like what i got from this..well worth the time pondering.. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
this one kinda "hurts where it counts", so to speak. Makes me think... Amazing how you can make or break the best and worst of things with words... *sigh*...just thinking. Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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