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D.Lester Young
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0 posted 2003-03-27 09:56 AM


In finger touches
So softly stroking
Melting so right
Almost purring in sighs

I hold you
In that special love
That will never surrender
Our joined marriage

In a fragrance
That is only you and me
We will make love
Into eternity

In passion so hot
We sweat into each other
So cool
To warm each other’s soul

Intertwining years
Of roller coaster rides
Have cemented the bond
Into independent adoration

As you move into me
With the softness
Of the morning light
We claim the same space

Your closed eyes
Opening into mine
A tear mists saying
I love you

As words from our hearts
Whisper into our lips
Good morning
My love

D.Lester Young 3/27/2003
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

[This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (03-27-2003 11:01 AM).]

© Copyright 2003 David Lester Young - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-27 10:03 AM


Your closed eyes
Opening into mine
A tear mists saying
I love you

Oh, how lovely. What a wonderful way to waken. Well done! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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2 posted 2003-03-27 12:17 PM


What a beautiful way to wake. *S*
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-03-27 12:21 PM


...and a very good morning to you!---Whoops, I got so caught up in your words, that I actually thought I was living them!  

Peace, Love & Light,
Earth Angel

Margherita
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4 posted 2003-03-27 12:25 PM


Morning whispers of lovers will resonate through the whole day and the hearts will sing in gratitude .....
Beautiful.
Love, Margherita

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5 posted 2003-03-27 12:27 PM


Beautiful....wonderful way to awaken.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-03-27 12:52 PM


Enjoyed...James
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7 posted 2003-03-27 08:04 PM


Lester - this is just a sunrise . . .  loved it xxoo
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8 posted 2003-03-29 03:22 PM




(smiles) This is lovely, sweet friend, this is soooooooo romantic as your words always shine with such versatile emotions of grace and meaning! (big hugggsssssss) I give you my sunshine vote, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet David, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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9 posted 2003-03-30 11:40 PM


Ahhh....very nice!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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