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Not Impressed By Song
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Not Impressed By Song |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Not Impressed By Song at times words hurt they rush us carelessly through razor like teeth thinly shredding skin swiftly grating and torturing an already scarred heart how do you measure the hierarchy of penetration between paper cut and profound surgical skill and how can you disregard rare flesh colored wine or is it you are impressed only by bursting hemorrhage as you find necessity in submissions endurance I find I tire quickly as of late and hear no notes in your song of lament |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Poignantly beautiful. Eric |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Helen - THIS is awesome! how do you measure the hierarchy of penetration between paper cut and profound surgical skill couldness can they be measured? Sometimes the papercut leaves a deeper scar than the surgery . . . very nice xxoo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sharp and clear. Impressive write. Margherita |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
beautiful! |
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