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Augest Nights |
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Silver_Tryst Member
since 2003-03-10
Posts 64MT |
We stood as silhouettes In the soft sunset light And fell in love with each other One warm Augest Night From that moment on There was no question in my mind You were the one who God Had guided me to find With every passing day Our love continues to grow I can't begin to tell you How much I love you so It was your wonderful love Which told me all along By your side forever Is where I do belong Each time I see you My love feels brand new And when I'm down, to fell better I only need think of you You reached into my heart Your love possessed the key If ever there was anyone, it was you Who helped me believe in me Each time I see you Is when I realize Ne'er again will I find the passion I see burning in your eyes Every night I fold my hands And take the time to pray God gives me the ability To do the best for you each day No one before you Ever made me feel like this I promise to fill your days With love and tenderness You are God's perfect angel And proved dreams can come true My life is forever complete All Because Of You |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Very nicely done. Just a little tip, August is spelled with a "u".  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is lovely...great job! Eric |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
Nice write, just the august with a "u" thing . |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Yes good piece and yes the u thing  |
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