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Open Poetry #25

Loss of a World

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

0 posted 2003-03-26 09:22 PM

Have you ever woken with tears in your eyes?
Weeping for the loss of a world,
For the loss of a paradise -
Robbed of bliss by Dawn's pilffering rosy fingertips.
Do you even remember it?
Or did the sun's cruel light burn away the soft mist of memory.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-03-26 10:58 PM

maj - like it was all a dream . . . this is lovely - sad but lovely . . . xxoo

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-03-27 12:59 PM

Enjoyed...James

waldopepper
Member

since 2003-03-18

Posts 157
Tennessee, USA

3 posted 2003-03-28 12:17 PM

A very vivid visualization (how do you like all them v's?) of vacuumous versimilitude. Well my friend, no one paints a scenario of reflection quite like you. Tight.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-03-28 12:45 PM

majnu, I liked this poem. Thanks for sharing.

Hugs,
Ethel

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