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Open Poetry #25

Hurt

P.R.C
Junior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 40
Hull, England

0 posted 2003-03-26 02:22 PM

I didnt think it would end like this
Why did you lie?
Did you think I wouldnt hurt?
That I wouldnt cry?
Did you think I wouldnt care?
That I wouldnt wanna die?
Dont worry if I do
It wont be down to you
You saved me, you pretended to love
I thought you was some sort of angel
Sent from above
An angel sent to save me
An angel to care
An angel I thought would always be there
You say youre still here
That you still care
But as a friend and no more
Why did you say you loved me?
When it wasnt true
Did you think I wouldnt ache, all the way through
I thought you would be the happiness
I had waited so long for
I thought you really cared
I didnt think I would be hurt anymore
Well you fooled me into thinking
Someone could actually love me
Now my heart is sinking
I guess I wanted to fool myself, I didnt want to see
The truth, because it always stings
Now its gone wrong
Just like everything
I kind of expected you to say
That you lied to me everyday
That you was leading me on
That it was all some sort of con
Now the bubbles popped
But my feelings for you havent stopped
I feel as if my worlds falling down around me
But I wont let you see
I wouldnt want to worry you
Or show you my pain
The pain I got from your little game

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2003-03-26 02:54 PM

I enjoyed reading this one, the rhyme and structure are good, and it ached all the way through.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-03-26 03:48 PM

completely enjoyed this

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