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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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After the rain pours down puffing cumulus clouds and the sky turns blue changing hues I shouldn't care if you get my drift I'm on my own turning about banking on the wind. It's all in a day just a matter of time to pass away until the sun shines though and my heart takes shape leaving ripples in the shallow end. Like a clean break or a slow intake rising tides mixed with emotions ebb and flow one wave at a time breathing deep exhale in ride it out lean to the left easy now~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (02-15-2003 04:52 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
First a smile  in response to yours ..... well I am at home in the sky and in the clouds .... and therefore appreciate this beautiful poem of yours!Love, Margherita |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ah, Blues, you've got me hooked with this one!! Today's a good day to take it easy, so think I'll take your advice and fly away!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (02-15-2003 08:02 AM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
take to the sky of the natural high, loving you more till the day that i die, love that platinum, |
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abbe Member
since 2003-01-20
Posts 131michigan, usa |
one breath one wave one moment... i love your poem. a great way to start a day! thanks... have a great day as you ease into its beauty. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very good advice Lori, which I think I will take. I know this feel. Hugs hon. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Must be me but this felt like riding a motorcycle...loved it! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BluesSerenade - I do like this, a'hhh yes, just easy now.... BC |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
That does it! I missed this one when it was first posted, and that was a loss. Now I wonder if there are other gems waiting for me, and I'm going to read Forum 25 from bottom to top, rather than top to bottom.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Yes, go with the flow and you will always find clear sailing from here, sweet friend, God Bless You, this is a beautiful destined write, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
"and my heart takes shape leaving ripples in the shallow end" i like this imagery...sometimes they are waves. Ending with a witty smile...enjoyed! Rf |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Well I guess I was trying to slow myself down and go with the flow, sometimes it works and sometimes it doesn't. Thanks to all of you for taking the time to read this.I'm always a little flustered when I see an older poem of mine bounced back up to the top. Thank you Ed for that little gem, it was a nice surprise. |
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