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Open Poetry #25

My Sweet Treat

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-03-26 03:37 AM

My Sweet Treat

Let me count the ways I love you.
I imagine it would take days
for me to count all the ways.
All the tender feelings in my heart.
The ways I miss you when we're apart.
Alas, I would love to count the ways
but I never seem to have the time.
For in a matter of minutes
my sweet treat will cross my doorstep
and once again she will be mine.

JamesLee
March25
2003

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-03-26 04:42 AM

beautiful!

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2003-03-26 06:41 AM

What a beautiful love poem!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2003-03-26 09:05 AM

So lovely!
Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-03-26 03:01 PM

Thank you passing shadows, Smart Chick and Margherita for the nice responses...James

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