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An Arrow in Flight
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An Arrow in Flight |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise 
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I hear you now, the night complete, a victorious blue breeze brushing rainbows for my mind, and all the passions of the world take character ... one word, moving swiftly like an arrow through the crowd, caught in a windsong; I hear you now, this word ... moistened by your poetry, like sunshine to the buttercup, only you can be my love. Poetry is: |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
one word, moving swiftly like an arrow through the crowd, caught in a windsong; This bends against the bough and tugs at my heart strings. *lovely* |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Cheryl, sweet lady, your writing is so beautiful, regardless of what you write about. I love your poetry, friend. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"only you can be my love." Like this...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
big warm smile on my face now |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Cheryl, There is something special about this poem. The balance and thoughts seem 'just right'! "windsong", I've always liked that word. and this line, refreshing, alive: "like sunshine to the buttercup" and this is truly how it is, tut, would be: "only you can be my love" oh, how right that is. You did a great job with this, it especially speaks to my heart and my feelings. Hope you are doing well, Cheryl, Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very nice poem! |
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