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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2003-03-25 09:12 PM



In singular expression, spectacular concession
The sun dispersed the sky to pallet painted high

By thimbleful, dabbed cotton pink, bravado of the best
To take the fore in azure glow as subtle set the rest

The utterance of beautiful by tone of deepest heart
To draw me to the banks and edifice of striking art

In singular expression, spectacular concession
The sun in azure light, slipped thin, now out of sight

Copyright Kkh 3/25/03

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2003-03-25 09:21 PM


TD...It must have been a beautiful sunset, for it sure was a beautiful poem!
inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2003-03-25 09:23 PM


the softness before the blaze, then the demise beatufiul
Bill Charles
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3 posted 2003-03-25 09:33 PM


ThisDiamond - now this had to be one inspiring sunset...

BC

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4 posted 2003-03-25 09:41 PM


Lovely images. Your style is wonderful
Sandra

Alwye
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5 posted 2003-03-25 09:47 PM


"By thimbleful, dabbed cotton pink, bravado of the best
To take the fore in azure glow as subtle set the rest" --that was my favorite image. Truly beautiful and very well expressed.  I enjoyed!

*Krista Knutson*

"If we have no peace, it is because we've forgotten that we belong to each other." ~Mother Teresa

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6 posted 2003-03-25 09:49 PM


Oh so beautiful Kathleen.
Such a vivid image.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

garysgirl
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7 posted 2003-03-25 10:00 PM


This is so beautiful, Kathleen.
Now, this  wonderful painting
done with your words should be framed.
It's a work of fine art.
Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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8 posted 2003-03-25 10:31 PM






(big hugggsssssssss) I have always found such a severity in blue sunsets, dearest friend, reminds me of an ocean hanging from a trapeze, this is astounding, I love your visions, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May ove and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

BluesSerenade
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9 posted 2003-03-26 03:18 AM


By thimbleful, dabbed cotton pink, bravado of the best
To take the fore in azure glow as subtle set the rest

You're writing is captivating,
and this just takes my breath away!!!

I applaud you Kathleen~  *applause*

PS... I did not read this before I had posted my "private space" and that you had used the word "bravado" also..

great minds think alike, I wish!!  


SmartChick
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10 posted 2003-03-26 07:00 AM


Beautiful Kathleen! I love the sunset.
Sunshine
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11 posted 2003-03-26 07:02 AM



You most certainly have been dipping
your quill in the most delightful
inkpots lately...

keep it up...

you're painting passion!

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