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Canneling Dylan and Drinking Wine
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Canneling Dylan and Drinking Wine |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes 
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She lazed into the room Hair flowing long Bads and feathers The Way Back Machine gone wrong Peace, Love, hearts on her jeans Her hat was Rocky Mountain High Channeling Dylan and Drinking Wine Halestorm called, said she Guitar strumming low A perfect mix Beatnik poet, Hippie girl Fran Fine and What's Going On Singing songs and feeling so high Channeling Dylan and Drinking Wine ************************************************* I swear to you all that tonight this girl actually walked into the Open mike I host on Tuesdays. I don't think even "Papa" Hemingway (all bow) could have written this girl. I had to put this down... it was just too perfect. Imagine all the People living life in peace... John Lennon [This message has been edited by Ringo (03-25-2003 11:57 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Brad - I loved this - very different from what I have seen here - and this: Her hat was Rocky Mountain High is just awesome . . . xxoo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...james |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
she sounds like one of those people that sweep you up in her aura...and then land you with a thud when they leave... :-) Have to meet her LOL Good job... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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