Open Poetry #25 |
Magnolia |
Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
I saw a white Magnolia floating in the surf just above the waves a flower from Mississippi dancing in the gulf waters against the Florida shores simple beauty trapped in a swirl of blue sea back and forth with the surge of the tide I wade out into the water to catch it but the flower seems to elude me as my feet sink into the sandbar it drifts just out of reach The faster I walk the further it slides into the depths The sun starts to set and my vision becomes obscured by the orange glow and I wonder if I will ever hold the Magnolia in my hands |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Thomas119gold - I love those southern magnolia's, just as big as a pie plate. Nice write, and it has my vote... BC |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Oh yes, I love magnolia trees, almost as much as the lacey mimosa. The citrus scented blooms are just lovely. This is a wonderful write, and it gets my vote. [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (03-25-2003 10:11 PM).] |
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Darkfire k'Sheyna Junior Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 26Maryland, U.S.A. |
oohh, I like it! Nice imagery. Good job. -darkfire |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Thomas, this is so beautiful but felt sad to me, dearest friend, I hope the flower isn't symbolic of your love and hope that true love always fills your heart, this reminded me of that scene in Cast Away with Tom Hanks when he tried to get Wilson but the volleyball drifted away, this is touching, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Thomas, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Learninginlife New Member
since 2003-03-13
Posts 9Mississippi |
Beautiful piece Thomas |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is so descriptive and lovely. Eric |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lovely, Thomas! Thank you for this elusive magnolia... Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoyed at least two layers of this lovely write... Warm hugs, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful and much enjoyed! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Elusive beauty slips away from our grasping hands... but remains protected in our hearts. *S* I like this very much! *S* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
pout--suthern said it first...this is lovely Thomas. This IS book worthy. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
excellent stuff... like Magnolia indeed... regards, sudhir |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Philosophy on the tide. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
My vote for this beautiful scene .... and scent! Love, Margherita |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thomas - I must say - this is the most beautiful thing I have read today - truly what most of us feel - you penned it perfectly - this is just amazing - has GOT to be in this book - got my vote xxoo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yep, I thoroughly enjoyed this one. I remember those southern magnolias, the sandbars, the warm gulf waters. |
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