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KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-03-25 07:45 PM

Batting eyelashes bat not
To be flirty and to swoon...
These old eyelashes bat
To call upon the moon.

Blinding sunlight streams
Through my dusty, limping curtains...
Let the Sun nestle in his nest
Then I'm sure to sleep for certain!

Oh, please let these blue, bloodshot eyes
Close down once again
And I'll kiss the warm, enticing dark
And float to Dream Trail Glen

Yes! The Sun is setting!
Do you see?!
Counting down to Dream Trail Glen...
1...2...Zzz

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

[This message has been edited by KoKo (03-25-2003 07:47 PM).]

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WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2003-03-25 07:58 PM

KoKo, this was a delightful read. It brought a smile, and a twinkle to these old eyes of mine.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-03-25 08:00 PM

KoKo..Loved this!
Very dreamlike quality...much enjoyed the read.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

3 posted 2003-03-25 08:02 PM

WhiteRose: Thanks, you've brought a smile to my face, also

Nancy: Thanks hun!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

4 posted 2003-03-25 08:49 PM

This had a very light and airy feel to it.....nice and dreamy. Wonderful write!

*Krista Knutson*

"If we have no peace, it is because we've forgotten that we belong to each other." ~Mother Teresa

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2003-03-25 09:11 PM

KoKo - nice write...

BC

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2003-03-25 09:14 PM

What a wonderful title...and such a pleasant read. Thanks KOKO. TD

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