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P.R.C
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 40
Hull, England

0 posted 2003-03-25 06:49 PM



The light that shone in my heart
The one who I have feelings for
That I have tried so hard to part
The harder I try, I pine for you more

I will be here for you
For eternity and after that
I will love you forever, you know its true

I dream of being in your hold
And staying with you, together growing old
If you loved me too
I would never leave your side
I would stay through the good and the bad
Through the happy and the sad

I would be there
Year after year
Waiting to hear
Those three words
Said with meaning
In total honesty
A feeling that we could share for eternity

But this wont happen
I am a friend to you
But you are so much more to me
If only you could truly see
What I am thinking and how I feel
You wouldnt believe it is all real

I love you
And will do forever
For you are the light in my heart
The one who brightens my world

© Copyright 2003 Hannah - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-03-25 06:56 PM


So very very beautiful Hannah!
Very open, honest and romantic.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
2 posted 2003-03-25 08:30 PM


Hello Hannah

This was so very beautiful.  I could feel the love throughout your words.

"Love - bittersweet,
irrepressible -
loosens the limbs
and I tremble"

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2003-03-25 10:57 PM


P.R.C - very open hearted write and a good one at that...

BC

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
4 posted 2003-03-25 10:59 PM


Hannah, this is beautiful.

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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