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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-03-25 06:31 PM



It's how we approach
one another -

Hungry for the scent of our
desires...we pause...taking measure
of all that lies within the space
between us.

We breathe this distance in.

Drawing closer in our steps...closer in our longing...closer in
our hunger...closer.

We stop...just short of touching.

Any farther and we would cease to exist.

We would merge in the fulfillment
of all that we desire.

For now...the approach
is enough.



© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2003-03-25 06:33 PM


Ooooh Myyyyy!!!
This is SO beautiful!!
~Smiles & Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

cinnamongirl
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2 posted 2003-03-25 07:52 PM


Heavy with sensual beauty, breathtaking message... just aaaahhhh... beyond words.

I love it...

Thank you!!

Moca

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3 posted 2003-03-25 07:56 PM


Absolutely beautiful, Eric.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

WhiteRose
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4 posted 2003-03-25 07:56 PM


This definately brings a *sigh*
Margherita
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5 posted 2003-03-26 08:10 AM


The space between us
holds everything
and we breathe it in ….
ascending with the power of
our desires to those heights
where breathing as one
is ….. enough.
The scents of desires
shared and met.

You created a magical approach, Eric!
Love, Margherita

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6 posted 2003-03-26 08:45 AM


An approach of this kind would certainly create a great deal of sexual tension!!! --- making the ultimate conjugation explosive and highly gratifying... What is worth having, is well worth the waiting!  

Love & Light,
EA

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7 posted 2003-03-26 10:48 AM


I really really like this! It was worded so well.. brought through so many.. very cool and sweet write

Tara

"in my field of paper flowers
and candy clouds of lullaby
i lie inside myself for hours
and watch my purple sky fly over me"
- Imaginary by Evanes

ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2003-03-26 11:32 AM


So true, the almost painful anticipation...
never to be rushed. TD

passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-03-26 01:00 PM


whoa!
Sunkissed
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10 posted 2003-03-27 11:07 AM


Awesome.


Sunkissed.

BluesSerenade
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11 posted 2003-03-27 11:13 AM


Enjoyed the flutter of anticipation
and the knowing look in your lovers eyes.

So beautiful these feelings Ericc~


littlewing
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12 posted 2003-03-27 11:33 AM


Ericc - Goddddd this is touching:

We breathe this distance in.


breathe it in . . .  lovely  xxoo

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2003-03-27 12:45 PM


I know this feeling...sometimes thoughts are enough...James
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