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Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-03-25 03:58 PM

If love were an ocean
would I still brave the violent storm
to search for you?

As the waters of fear smashed my sail
would I turn back,
or die trying to reach you?

At times you are within my grasp
then the waves steal me away
telling of danger and harm

so I sail again toward you
only to be turned away in despair

when I grow tired of trying
and wish I could change course
the waters drift me closer to you
not close enough to touch you
but close enough
to stir my heart once more

Once again begain my endless voyage
reaching only anticipation
but never coming aground
on affections' sweet shores.

If you are a torturer
then you do your craft well
or do I run these jagged rocks
through my heart
of my own free will.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2003-03-25 04:15 PM

"If you are a torturer
then you do your craft well
or do I run these jagged rocks
through my heart
of my own free will."

Bravo! Very good write!

Susan

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2003-03-25 04:25 PM

Great Title...only paled to the content of the write. ThisDiamond

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-03-25 04:27 PM

Thank you

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-03-25 05:20 PM

This is very good, Brad.
I enjoyed it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

5 posted 2003-03-25 05:31 PM

OMG...OMG...brad i wish i had written this...it says what i want to say...it is so beautiful...helen

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

6 posted 2003-03-25 05:50 PM

thank you

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

7 posted 2003-03-25 06:14 PM

Brad, this is strong stuff! excellent!

Rf

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

8 posted 2003-03-25 06:27 PM

Excellent!
Eric

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2003-03-25 06:32 PM

Wonderful..much enjoyed!!
~Smiles & Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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