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Causing A Stir
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Causing A Stir |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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Like the slightest movement of a thin mist swirling unforgiven darkness of heart waiting for substance, thoughts that have been kissed consuming, and causing a stir to start First a taste, an attraction not to waste a look, a face, something of in it's place don't rush uncontrollably in haste believe, and allow love to set heart's pace To unbridled passions from just a smile a heard of words ... and a body's desire continue the stir but simmer awhile careful not to burn yourself in it's fire When is time right? We may never know ... but true love awaits in the afterglow Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very soft, wise words love the ending lines! just beautiful! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very, very true...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mollie963 Junior Member
since 2003-02-12
Posts 14 |
I absolutely loved this poem.... what beautiful words... When is time right? We may never know ... but true love awaits in the afterglow love the ending... beautiful job... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful poem. Great rhythm too. Margherita |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 ME~ Take me where the tides start So I can pull you into me [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-19-2003 10:33 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this style...James |
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