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Ringo
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Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2003-03-25 01:21 AM



Get out of my life
My teen son cried
As he threw papers towards the door
I don't need you
Certainly don't want you
To be interfering in what doesn't concern
I am fourteen
And can make my own decisions
You don't know what's best for me
I can do as I wish
There is nothing you can say right
You can't stop me from doing anything
You're stupidI hate you
Stay out of my life forever...
But first, can you drive me to the mall??


And they wonder why our hair turns grey...
>

~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one...
John Lennon

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1 posted 2003-03-25 01:24 AM


ahh, this was great. Great job.

and....your welcome.

"The Only Easy Day Was Yesterday"
                 --U.S. Navy SEALs

littlewing
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2 posted 2003-03-25 02:20 AM


ahhhh what I have to look forward to - thanks for reminding me Brad - this was good - hehehe I will just color my hair xxoo
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3 posted 2003-03-25 03:32 AM


I have a 14 year old girl...shall we go get a beer and commiserate?
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4 posted 2003-03-25 06:39 AM




in my house, im the rebel, sorry cant relate
the kids a square, daddeo

me and the old man are the osbornes, with
out the cash

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5 posted 2003-03-25 06:47 AM



We survive our kids...
and as we get older?
They think we get smarter...

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6 posted 2003-03-25 02:27 PM


Thanks for all the kind words..
littlewing... Grecian Formula just doesn't work quickly enough
shadows... Your place of mine... I'll bring the case  lol
goddess... I THOUGHT I was the rebel... until he became a teen
Sunshine... To quote the great Samuel Clemens- "When I was a child I thought my parents were the stupidest people. When I was 25, I was amazed at how much they had learned. (OK, OK... so I paraphrased)

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

Suetang
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7 posted 2003-03-25 03:57 PM


Hey Bradly

So this is what I have to look forward to when my 10 year old daughter becomes a teenager??  Oh, dear!!!  The problem is that I already have some grey hairs which I try desperately to conceal.  I loved the way this was written and could relate.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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8 posted 2003-03-25 04:49 PM


Yep, this brought back lots of memories
of my daughter's teenage years, as well as
my own. LOL  Good luck!

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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9 posted 2003-03-25 06:24 PM


*s  made me smile..but at least it's just turning grey and not thinning ..

M

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10 posted 2003-03-25 11:34 PM


Actually, it is a little... I just didn't want to deal with THAT issue  

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

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