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Sunkissed
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0 posted 2003-03-24 09:43 PM



Don't you see?
I never knew
where I stood
foolishly blundering
every step of the way
ensuring things were
never quite right

my own fault

I will go away
wrong
confused & ever
wondering

If...

Sunkissed.



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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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1 posted 2003-03-24 11:16 PM


Sun - on this eve - you have read my heart - this is just wrenching - I know this . . . may you find your peace  xxoo
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2 posted 2003-03-25 01:24 AM


The saddest one single word in the English language... IF. Also the hardest word to get over.
Great job on this.

~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one...
John Lennon

NavySEAL
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since 2003-03-21
Posts 17

3 posted 2003-03-25 01:25 AM


I agree, tough word.  I enjoyed this read, very thought provoking.

"The Only Easy Day Was Yesterday"
                 --U.S. Navy SEALs

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
4 posted 2003-03-25 04:14 AM


Attracted by the Italian title .... I find the content sadly corresponding.
Impressive.
Peace and love.
Margherita

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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5 posted 2003-03-25 08:00 AM


Wow...this is beautiful and deeply touching.
Eric

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