Open Poetry #25 |
The Silence Of This Love |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
We allow words to gather slowly to our silence - Filling ourselves to the holiness of their presence. We trace the words as they fall across the lips of the other. And read each one with a kiss. Until we find ourselves once more in the silence of this love. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There are all kinds of love, Eric, and you have shown that very well... thank you... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I liked this very much...a peaceful warm read. *s M |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Excellent. Pretty on the page, perfect in the form...breathtaking in the content. ThisDiamond |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Now, Eric, the silence where love is, I like. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Eric, this is lovely, sweet friend, silence can usually be deafening but as long as you share it with someone with a smile silence can feel so soft and velveteen as all the embers glow around you! (big hugggsssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Just beautiful! |
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pearl6884 Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 72California coast |
I really do love this poem. Very touching and easy to relate to. Thanks and hope to read more soon! |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
These words evoke beautiful emotions... the sweetness in the silence of love so profound that there is nothing to say... love is all and it speaks its own language. And sometimes in its own silence, its message is brought forth with an amazing clarity that words would only obscure. Be still. Breathe... and listen to the silence of love. Thank you... Love, Moca |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfectly beautiful! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Etain Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 92The moon... |
Sublime... so sublime. Hugs, Etain. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A lovely write. I enjoyed the very subtle feel of this. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ericc - this is lovely: And read each one with a kiss. couldnt have said it better xxoo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh so magical! When this kind of silence is filled with KNOWING, it sparkles through the eyes and is interpreted instantly without a sound ....except maybe with a sigh ... Love, Margherita |
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