Open Poetry #25 |
Mind Crime |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
It's criminal though minimal in the scheme of things the theme of things still it's criminal subliminal this crime against my mind. WhiteRose |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Very good! love your poem. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Subliminal messages are a crime against the mind and you wrote very well of that crime against the mind ~ in rhyme! Love & Light, EA |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you Miah, for reading and responding. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Linda, some poems just seem to rhyme coming out, some take work. This is one of those ones that just jingled it's way out onto the page. I think I was listening to too much Eminem that day. Thank you dear lady for your very nice response. |
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