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Open Poetry #25

My heart will beat again

ShaolinsOnlyPoet
Junior Member

since 2003-02-17

Posts 31
Brooklyn, New York

0 posted 2003-02-18 01:02 AM

Now that things are over
I have nothing left to say
But I think you'll find
In time
Ill get over u someday
Now that things are over
My eyes keep crying oceans on the floor,
But I think you'll find
In time
I won't be crying anymore
Although we are over,
And I've completely given in,
I think you'll find
In time
My heart will beat again

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-18 12:01 PM

Sad poem but I liked it

Cold hands means a warm heart

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2003-02-18 12:02 PM

Very nice read.

Susan C.

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-02-18 12:24 PM

this is a very nice read!

Fauxreal
Junior Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 38

4 posted 2003-02-20 01:35 PM

Time heals all wounds. um..unless you need stitches- then you'd better get to a doctor- hey THEN you'll heal.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-02-21 04:02 AM

good, I enjoyed this

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2003-02-21 06:54 AM

I believe it...James

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

7 posted 2003-03-02 10:28 PM

Candii,

You have written my heart here. Great poem and I'm off to read more that I have missed.

Dawn

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2003-03-02 11:52 PM

Enjoyed this heartbeat poem. Yes, in time you just might get over it. Notice I said might, rather than will?

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2003-03-02 11:57 PM

(big hugggsssssss) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, you will heal soon enough and you will be remembered as amends will be made! (sad sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2003-03-03 11:09 AM

ENJOYED

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