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Hail or Fail
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Hail or Fail |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Hail or Fail What kind of cist can hold the soul? Its mist and its future goal What kind of dove, what kind of glove Can hold the essence of a love? I ask because I’m swept away Each minute of each living day Hedged within arranging rhyme And pledged the edge of changing time I live in life’s fraternity. And question its eternity. I cannot see beyond the dawn. Nor behind the door I was born. And now I’ve reached the stage of pox. The paradox of alters rocks. In the middle of a bend And cannot see the start or end. I can only sail to sight the whale But never know its hail or fail. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And now I've reached the stage of pox. The paradox of alters rocks. ===================================== and that will by me WAAAY COOL line of the day... So is your pox contagious? I sure hope so   LOL*winkiewinkie*   |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sy, This is wonderful; lots of truths... enjoyed greatly. Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very lyrical read this morning Sy! Much enjoyed as always...tea's on! ~Morning hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"What kind of cist can hold the soul? Its mist and its future goal What kind of dove, what kind of glove Can hold the essence of a love?" For lack of a better expression, Holy Crap!! Those lines!! Made me ponder..I love it, simply beautiful. Susan |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) In the stage of pox, it can really be both I imagine, hail during the rainy season and fail during the dry season! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, well-done, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan, A wonderful reply, thank you. Noah, Isn't everything two? LOL |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Sy...you've yinged my yang again...  |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Beau-T-ful! I love it. Especially that first section.. ahh brilliant! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I live in life’s fraternity. And question its eternity. Ahh Seymour, Your words have made my mind wander off again this morning. Wonderful. Toast & Cinnamon spread alright with you? hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine I've yinged your yang and heard the clang. Alyssa, Thank you sweet thing. Chris, Toast and Cinnamon spread is fine, hugs. Nancy, Tea is fine, hugs. Pat, Thank you glad you enjoyed. JM, Not only contagious, but outragious. WWRS |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...To question, is to be alive! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love your internal rhyming...bet it's always inside you waiting to write itself. M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie I guess that's what keeps me going. LOL Maureen, Sometimes it need a little prodding, LOL |
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