Open Poetry #25 |
Truth In Our Eyes |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
As you come in the door, you see me sleeping on the couch, waiting for you I awaken as you reach over to kiss me wondering if this is a dream, or really true Then I open my eyes and looking into your eyes, I know that it is true For I can see deep into them all your love shining brilliantly through I see love like I've never seen before shining clearly through the eyes of you Knowing that as you look deep into my eyes you see my love shining back at you, too As our love is all aglow, we know this is not a dream, but passionately true Who could ever doubt, with love such as ours you for me, me for you, true love between us two ****** |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
this is a beautiful write, garysgirl, about a love everyone searches for Enjoyed reading it hugs, kelly |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, the joy you must have felt when you realized that it was not a dream......(tho' dream he may be!) Peace & Love to you both, Linda |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
*sigh*....I miss that.... :-) |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
The simple miracles in our lives... may they be contagious... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
good one garysgirl bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you always make me smile and believe |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Ethel, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I am so happy that this is not just a dream and I wish for this happiness to always sing in your soul! (kiss on cheek) I keep praying I can have love close to my heart soon too, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Simply beautiful. Eric |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Beautiful words, beautiful presentation. Love glows through your poetry. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Does Miami Beach kinda pale in shimmering when your heart lights up for this man? This is a loving tribute, Ethel, and says as much about you as it does about him. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
How wonderful to have this certainty. You share it beautifully! Love, Margherita |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Awwww... SO sweet! I love this one Tara "in my field of paper flowers |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ethel - I must say that when I read you - you carry me to a place I long for - A place I dream of in this deep dark night - your words console me throughout this arduous journey of mine and I thank you xxoo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ethel--I'm happy that you have such love! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kelly, I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for replying. . . Linda, oh yes, he sure is a dream.... my dreamboat.... . . Kristie Sue, I'm sorry it made you lonesome..... . . Mark, yes, may they be contagious. Thank you for reading & replying. . . I appreciate you all. Heart Hugs to you all, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bernie, hi, friend. It's good to see you here. Thank you for replying. . . Dixie, I'm glad that I make you smile and believe. . . Noah, you will find your Love one day,friend. Thank you for your sweet words. . . Eric, thank you for liking my poem. I appreciate it.... . Heart Hugs to all of you, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kacy, thank you for your nice comments. I really appreciate them. . . Ken, Yeah, our hearts light up every time we think of each other. Thank you for the sweet words. . . Margherita, Thank you so much. Yes, it's wonderful for us to be sure of each other's love. . . Heart Hugs to you all, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Tara, Thank you very much. I'm glad that you liked it. . . Sue, Thank you, little friend, for those sweet words. I'm really glad that my words make you feel better. . . Martie, Thank you very much, sweet friend. I appreciate you so much. . . Heart Hugs to each of you, Ethel |
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