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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Endless tears freely fall from Heaven drowning my soul Forlorn I carry myself solemn to the place of my birth |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey ED - *wink* thanks |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I like that picture! And this poem is beautiful even in its sadness, dear littlewing. Peace to you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hmmm! I'm perplexed! The poem and your happy photo don't jive! Hope this was just you stretching your poetic wings--and if so, it was a well-done stretch at that!  Peace & Love, EA |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Sue This was so very sad yet so very beautiful. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely write littlewing. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I love a writer than can cover different ground, your writing is diverse. Jason |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ozzy once said no more tears, I agree |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
scatter me in a field of sunflowers, let the tears fall as im reborn........... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sad, but the last word is BIRTH .... and whether you meant it or not .... I feel it is a good sign. Beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggggsssssss) Oh Sue, I send many angel hugs your way, sweet friend, I understand your sorrow as I too feel this as I grew up unhappily! (big hugggssssss) May that smile like in that lovely picture always grace your heart now, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Midnite - TY so much - such nice words from you always EA - I know - that px is ruining my image - one px I actually have where I am smiling - I am sooo serious but TY - btw - love your quote there Sue - TY sooo much - always good to see your smiles here . . . Thank you Chris! Jason TY so much - diverse? Is that what you call this . . . lol Raph - *nodding head in agreement* - hey - how about "Seasons in the Sun" - that guy - that song - just shouldnt have been recorded - sorry tangent TY xxoo Michele - WOW - you got it - thats a nice start for a poem there - or and ending . . . Margherita - hehehehe - you GOT it - rebirth - nice job - there . . . Noah - how very sweet of you - that is the only GOOD smiling px I have vandana - Ty so much thanks guys - xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-23-2003 04:38 AM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Hi Sue  You said so much with so few words. And you said them perfectly. Enjoyed the read of this. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, you always have very good thoughts in your poetry. Even though this was sad, it is beautiful.  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
seems as though drowning tears became cleansing tears beatiful expression thoroughly felt and enjoyed |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Uh, your welcome, I guess. (thanks?) This was (is) lovely in it's lonely. Ed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 beautiful |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful!! Charisma |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Dream - thank you - yes cleansing . . . the only good kind Ed - lol - that those sentences I wrote earlier - remember? lonely yes - but not here with you guys shadows - dont cry - is a good one . . . charisma - TY so much [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-23-2003 04:42 AM).] |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I love the solitude in this, mixed with a touch of forlorn. I'll chip in good thoughts on the picture too. Ken J Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Ken - for both lol xxoo |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Beautiful! JUST BEAUTIFUL!!!!  ~Al |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Al - brought me a smile TY |
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Little_One Junior Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 34montana |
it was awsome sue Kristin |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
littlewing...sometimes going back helps us to go forward.  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kristen & Martie - thank you both so very much and yes - backwards I feel . . . so it is a good thing then - yes? lol xxoo |
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