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littlewing
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0 posted 2003-03-22 02:47 PM



Endless tears
freely fall from Heaven
drowning my soul

Forlorn
I carry myself
solemn
to the place of my birth


© Copyright 2003 Sue Eckam - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-03-22 02:51 PM


Hey ED - *wink*  thanks
Midnitesun
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2 posted 2003-03-22 02:51 PM


I like that picture!
And this poem is beautiful even in its sadness, dear littlewing.
Peace to you.

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-03-22 03:30 PM


Hmmm! I'm perplexed! The poem and your happy photo don't jive! Hope this was just you stretching your poetic wings--and if so, it was a well-done stretch at that!

Peace & Love,
EA

Suetang
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4 posted 2003-03-22 04:28 PM


Hello Sue

This was so very sad yet so very beautiful.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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5 posted 2003-03-22 05:05 PM


Lovely write littlewing. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Jason Lyle
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6 posted 2003-03-22 05:21 PM


I love a writer than can cover different ground, your writing is diverse.
Jason

Aenimal
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7 posted 2003-03-22 05:48 PM


Ozzy once said no more tears, I agree
inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2003-03-22 05:54 PM


scatter me in a field of sunflowers,
let the tears fall as im reborn...........

Margherita
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9 posted 2003-03-22 07:12 PM


Sad, but the last word is BIRTH .... and whether you meant it or not .... I feel it is a good sign.
Beautiful.
Love, Margherita

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10 posted 2003-03-22 07:32 PM




(big hugggggsssssss) Oh Sue, I send many angel hugs your way, sweet friend, I understand your sorrow as I too feel this as I grew up unhappily! (big hugggssssss) May that smile like in that lovely picture always grace your heart now, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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11 posted 2003-03-22 07:45 PM


enjoyed
littlewing
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12 posted 2003-03-22 11:22 PM


Midnite - TY so much - such nice words from you always

EA - I know - that px is ruining my image - one px I actually have where I am smiling - I am sooo serious but TY - btw - love your quote there

Sue - TY sooo much - always good to see your smiles here . . .

Thank you Chris!

Jason TY so much - diverse?  Is that what you call this . . . lol

Raph - *nodding head in agreement* - hey - how about "Seasons in the Sun" - that guy - that song - just shouldnt have been recorded - sorry tangent TY  xxoo

Michele - WOW - you got it - thats a nice start for a poem there - or and ending  . . .

Margherita - hehehehe - you GOT it - rebirth - nice job - there . . .

Noah - how very sweet of you - that is the only GOOD smiling px I have

vandana - Ty so much

thanks guys - xxoo  

[This message has been edited by littlewing (03-23-2003 04:38 AM).]

WhiteRose
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13 posted 2003-03-23 12:26 PM


Hi Sue

You said so much with so few words. And you said them perfectly. Enjoyed the read of this.

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14 posted 2003-03-23 12:45 PM


Sue, you always have very good thoughts
in your poetry. Even though this was
sad, it is beautiful.  

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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15 posted 2003-03-23 02:02 AM



seems as though
drowning tears
became cleansing tears

beatiful expression
thoroughly felt
and enjoyed

wranx
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16 posted 2003-03-23 04:13 AM


Uh, your welcome, I guess.

(thanks?)

This was (is) lovely in it's lonely.

Ed.

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17 posted 2003-03-23 04:22 AM


beautiful
Charisma
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18 posted 2003-03-23 04:35 AM


Beautiful!!

Charisma

littlewing
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19 posted 2003-03-23 04:41 AM


Dream - thank you - yes cleansing . . .  the only good kind

Ed - lol - that those sentences I wrote earlier - remember?  lonely yes - but not here with you guys

shadows - dont cry - is a good one . . .

charisma - TY so much

[This message has been edited by littlewing (03-23-2003 04:42 AM).]

kayjay
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20 posted 2003-03-23 09:30 AM


I love the solitude in this, mixed with a touch of forlorn.  I'll chip in good thoughts on the picture too.  Ken J

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

littlewing
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21 posted 2003-03-24 01:58 PM


Thanks Ken - for both lol xxoo
Albert J. Allie
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22 posted 2003-03-24 04:43 PM


Beautiful! JUST BEAUTIFUL!!!!


~Al

littlewing
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23 posted 2003-03-24 06:51 PM


Thanks Al - brought me a smile TY
Little_One
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24 posted 2003-03-24 10:40 PM


it was awsome sue

Kristin

Martie
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25 posted 2003-03-24 11:23 PM


littlewing...sometimes going back helps us to go forward.  
littlewing
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26 posted 2003-03-24 11:55 PM


Kristen & Martie - thank you both so very much and yes - backwards I feel . . . so it is a good thing then - yes?  lol  xxoo
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