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Rdz9
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0 posted 2003-03-24 12:35 PM


This goes out that that special girl in my life......

There are so many words I cannot say,
when I look into your eyes.
I want to be able to tell you one day,
but I'm left speechless every time that I try.
You must have stumbled across the key,
and discovered so much more.
You found a hidden place in me,
you found my heart and opened the door.
And I cried in pain
of losing my dear friend.
Will it ever be the same again?
If it passes will it be the end?
I realized it was worth so much,
as I lie in bed that night.
So I allowed my soul to be touched,
without even putting up a fight.
Are my eyes deceiving me,
when I see you standing there?
Are you playing games,
just to prove I care?
You speak my name in a prelude,
in a reference to love,
with such loving attitude,
as if it were a message from above.
With the palms of your hands
pressed firmly against mine,
a white doves lands,
and the sun begins to shine.
Someday I will see,
though that day has not come yet.
You'll say you love me,
but will you ever forget?
If that happens and my spirit dies,
if my emotions drop,
will you want to hold me when I cry?
Or will the love just suddenly stop?
We can't expect to fall in love and never cry.
You'll stay and play your part,
but after the beauty starts to die,
will your footprints still be on my heart?
Though it would be hard to say goodbye,
your friend I'll always be,
as long as we always try,
to keep the friendship between you and me.
The letter I will not send
will casually inquire,
how could you have brought it to an end?
I was your one desire.
After this life is over,
you'll be one person I know I'll miss.
It'll be too late to start over, and so I leave you with this...
I'll hold you for a lifetime,
if you'll just hold my hand.
We could have a wonderful time,
in the days we have not yet planned.

© Copyright 2003 Rob - All Rights Reserved
Rdz9
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since 2003-03-16
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1 posted 2003-03-24 12:41 PM


Lol... im replying to my own thing. Actually i did not write this, my friend did, and posted under my name. Give Slvrtryst credit for this beautiful work.
Justbleu
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2 posted 2003-03-25 09:25 AM


Beautiful write!!!! Your friend writes well too!!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Brad Majors
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Georgia
3 posted 2003-03-25 03:32 PM


This is very pretty I'm sure the intended would enjoy it a lot!
Little_One
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montana
4 posted 2003-03-25 07:37 PM


I really like it...it fits perfectly with a special guy that I know

Kristin

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5 posted 2003-03-25 08:00 PM


Enjoyed the read of this.
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