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Starsfalling
Member

since 2003-03-18

Posts 94
some where deep in the shadows

0 posted 2003-03-23 07:35 PM

Bouncing uncontrolled by any soul
your words are that of sweet candy
as they flow to my heart
captured, my heart soul and mind
are in the heppiest place, i have ever seen
my mind drifts with thoughts of you,
never minding the here and now
only the where and when, i meet you
with you i am never forgotten,
and always my heart finds happiness
when you near...

i love that girl
-lance

I only wish i hadnt felt so alive.. that way I couldnt feel so dead when you left

Finally_When
Junior Member

since 2003-03-20

Posts 13
Land Of Misfits...

1 posted 2003-03-23 07:37 PM

Hehe This was our best poem together

Especially since it has been our only one!

Simply When..

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

2 posted 2003-03-23 07:50 PM

Hi Lance & Alix

I like your collaboration, it's fitting you two. I've come to know you both, as friends, and as fellow poets. I'm glad to see you both here, and this poem is beautiful.

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (03-23-2003 07:51 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-03-23 08:15 PM

(smiles) Oh Lance and Alix, this is a gorgeous collaborative effort, sweet friend, I love this very much as this shines and radiates with loves smiles, yay! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friends, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Alix and Lance, thank you for sharing!

May love and light awlays shine upon you both!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

4 posted 2003-03-23 08:30 PM

What a lovely write - gets my vote.

Starsfalling
Member

since 2003-03-18

Posts 94
some where deep in the shadows

5 posted 2003-03-24 04:01 PM

hehe alix it is our best... hopefully it wont be our last
for u this is not enough... all the poems i could ever write would never be just what u deserve, but i will try and will write
love ya
-lance
There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laugher of thirsting gods

I only wish i hadnt felt so alive.. that way I couldnt feel so dead when you left

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