Open Poetry #25 |
When you're just not sure... |
pearl6884 Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 72California coast |
Words come easier When absence grows nearer No certainty No promises Only the present is now Our beds have been shared With strangers But especially you How can I explain? I can't give proof of anything More than this physical match We stumble in this interminable night Perchance encounter joy "Soon" you hope But I know there are a thousand lives to live Afraid to say "wait" Don't question my will It will happen when wrong Becomes right When then Becomes now And if the passion fades I'll remember. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Sarah! I do believe you're going to enjoy yourself among our blue pages! Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) I think you have grasped on exactly when you can be sure of something, dearest friend, the past should never co-exist with the now and I hope you find the spark in such a moment! This is a heartfelt debut, dearest friend, you will fit right in with this wonderful poetic family, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet Sarah, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your fabulous poetry, ooohhhhhh...and be sure to check your E-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sarah, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Passions, Sarah. Your first post underscores one of the sad dimensions of Love. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Very nice post, welcome to the forums.Looking forward to reading more. Jason |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Much enjoyed your first post. I'll look for more of your work soon. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Really enjoyed this first post of yours, very nice and I happily voted on it. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Very nicely done. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome to Passions! A supportive home of kindred spirits who are passionate about poetry! Enjoyed your first post! Warm welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is an excellent first post, Pearl. I can tell you'll like it here. I hope to see more of your work. And... Hugs, Ethel....garysgirl |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I like how you weave truth into a delicate, and yet hard, poetry. |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
good write ready for more Thomas |
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