To Hope Beyond (senryu) - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-03-23 02:41 PM

The desperate fling
of fly against window pane
to the very death

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-03-23 02:56 PM

OOOPPPSS!!!!
Must've been a clean window pane....LOL

Seriously, you know I love these
little verses.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-03-23 03:07 PM

You know i love yer responses

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2003-03-23 03:08 PM

hehe, they missed my windows
too much dirt I guess
think I'll just leave them alone for now

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

4 posted 2003-03-23 03:28 PM

Now, if they only understood that there IS no window...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2003-03-23 04:37 PM

take his soul........as he takes yours,
you, me , the fly,
all visitors in the material world.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-03-23 04:43 PM

Ok - I am in a philosophical mood here today:

This is amazing because just think of it - that fly - means nothing to us really - does it? A splat on the window - the windshield - right? A simple observation -but ITS entire world - gone - in an instant - never thought of by us - yet think of those same verses above and apply them to self. Pretty real then - isnt it?

Raph - I looked out my window and saw that fly and this is what I thought of - just how quick it all passes us by . . . nice job - as always amazing xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (03-23-2003 04:46 PM).]

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-03-23 04:47 PM

You ever see a fly on a window sell dying, it will keep flinging itself against the window until it finally does. The effort, the hope, and ultimate futility of it all always gets me. Thanks for reading writing everyone I'm off to take a nap

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (03-23-2003 04:48 PM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-03-23 05:10 PM

gotcha . . . sleep well xxoo

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2003-03-23 07:39 PM

A powerful little piece...
In light of today's events, I took a larger meaning...all is relative.
Good job poet. TD

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.