Open Poetry #25 |
Misguided love |
Vellgred New Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 2 |
(Misguided love) The love I have for you is stronger then the wind. Though you say it’s untrue, my heart aches when I’m near you. Knowing you will forgive is a blessing to ones ears, Although why should you. They say time is constant and a healer of the soul, Then why must we be apart? When two hearts are like one. I was a fool blinded by your beauty and kindness, Mistaken by your friendship for love. I plead and beg with the thoughts in my head, If given the chance for romance I’d rather be dead. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! A powerful first write, no misguided reply here...Please! Check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?... |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Welcome to Passions. A very nice submission. I look forward to reading more. SG |
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
Nice write, sad the tone M@C |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A very powerful first post. And I hope you like it here. It's a very good place to be, with lots of wonderful and compassionate people. Heart Hugs, Ethel....garysgirl |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to the land where all aspects of Love are poetically expressed. looking forward to more from you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Much enjoyed your powerful first post. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Enjoyed your first post!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big huggggssssssssss) I too don't understand why we are all left misguided either, dearest friend, this is a very powerful debut that expresses honesty of emotion, God Bless You, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Vellgred, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vellgred, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Vellgred New Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 2 |
I just wanted to thank everyone for the kind words. Its great to get other peoples views and opinions on things I write. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions... I do believe you belong here! ThisDiamond |
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