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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
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since 2001-06-02

Posts 190

0 posted 2003-03-23 12:01 PM

Temple of terror
baptism in blood
Tainted unreason
unmerciful flood
Belching inaction
we continue to bleed
Head in the sand
but where does it lead
A doorway of doom
left standing ajar
Inviting ill spirits
that scheme from afar
Stoke Satan’s fire
through lies and deceit
Find willing fodder
turned hamburger meat
Taking as many
lives as they can
For a picture of paradise
painted by man
Author
copyright ©
Ed Schmidt 2003

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-03-23 12:05 PM

Ed...you haven't lost your touch...

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-03-23 12:19 PM

Yes...
It's good to see you posting something again
even on a sad, sad subject. We all have to do something to end this madness.

Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
Member

since 2001-06-02

Posts 190

3 posted 2003-03-23 12:53 PM

Thank you Sunshine,
I am pleased to post my ramblings
Though they be few

Thank you Midnight,
Maddness seems pandemic these days

M@C

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-03-24 02:50 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Ed, this is so very well-written but sad, sweet friend, there is too much madness going on, especially during this unnecessary war! (sad sigh) You have my vote, dearest friend, kudos to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ed, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

5 posted 2003-03-24 03:03 PM

Interesting, it gets my vote.

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 2003-04-02 02:36 AM

Very interesting indeed

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-04-02 03:58 AM

love the ending! great piece!

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

8 posted 2003-04-12 07:21 PM

Oh so sad but good write

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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