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Between the Drops
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Between the Drops |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Between the Drops This day I walked between the drops The plops and flops of water whops They fell about me large in swell Mostly cause I ran like hell. I made the shelter of a Mall. Heard the echoes of a call. And then a warm and friendly pat She took my hat and then we sat. I ordered coffee and we talked She took my hand and then we walked She kissed me on the cheek and said I got to go and then she fled. It seemed to me a bit unreal It had the feeling of surreal How could a moment of a dove Make me feel I was in love. But magic happens everyday And we married that very May. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow Seymour, what rhythm of joy. I love this and I am tempted to say Noah's words ... kiss (on cheek!). Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SY! HUGE grin.... thank you... this...held serendipity....   |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I really like the part "but magic happens every day"....James |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Seymour Tabin../\..very nice; much enjoyed; must say it again: "i like your poems.." ../\..Spiros ------------------poetry------ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita Thank you for the  Sunshine, serendipity, James, Well it does, LOL thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Spiros, And I like your replies, thank you. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Ah Sey always such a pleasure to read your words, lovely penned  Charisma |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! So...this is how you met the missus! What a lovely story..and if I may say.. It does sound like pure magic! ~Sunday Smiles, Hugs & Chai Tea~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
This is a great story and very well told! Who says rain isn't romantic? KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning to you, Dear Sonneteer! First you had me giggling--and then you had me oooing and awwwing. Rather enjoyed the gamut of emotions this wonderful poem evoked in me! A will-o-the-wisp, such as yourself, would easily slip between raindrops... Peace & Love, EA |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
SY, What a precious story told in rhyme. I love it! Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ahhhh Seymour, tis smiles you have brought to me this fine Sunday morn. Lovely indeed. Is the tea still hot enough for cinnamon toast? hope so....hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh, Seymour... I loved this romantic rhyme. So sweet. Aren't you glad that you got caught in the rain that day? Oh, and I'm glad that the "magic is still happening every day"  Thank you for sharing your heart with us, friend.........  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awww Seymour, this is so beautiful. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma Thank you dear. Nancy, Hugs back, kayjay rain isn't romantic? Not I Earth Angel Loved your comment. Pat, Glad you liked. Chris, Glad you enjoyed, hugs back. Ethel, You are a dear. SmartChick Thank you sweet. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Thus the reason why they call it May Day and they commemmorate the May Pole in anniversary to the apple in your eye! (big hugggsssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you for the read and reply. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sy, you're such a cool writer yanno that! I missed your imaginative and playful poetry. Thanks for giving me a smile Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~sigh~ to love.....wow SY Lauren~ HUGSSSSS I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sy, Big smiles on this awesome write, loved it. Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melissa, I missed you, Greeneyes WOW and HUGSSSSS, you made my day. Cerenity Thank you love, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What an absolute delight! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Delighted with your delight. |
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