Open Poetry #25 |
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Alone |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Mother wakes from another weekend binge. Father...God knows who or where. She takes a pill to fade away the headache And showers for forty five minutes. Where is the good morning? Where did the hugs go? Mother does not love anyone. She loves the highness. Mother dresses. Mother takes the money I saved. I try to hide it, but she always finds it. I fend for myself. I cook. I clean. I talk to me. Alone. As alone as anyone can be. Mother leaves again, leaving behind tears of pain. Mommy...please don't go. Mommy stay. The words fall on deaf ears. Mother goes away. Alone. Alone as anyone can be. The room is empty. The sound of the television ungratifying. The sound of children in the yard, playing with their father. The little voice cries into the air. No one hears. Alone. All Alone |
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Denea Furr Junior Member
since 2002-11-03
Posts 31Indiana |
that makes me want to cry. very touching. "What a tangled web we weave, when we practice to decieve." |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is a very sad write. ![]() |
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Amara Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 158East of the moon, west of the sun. |
*sniffles* I hate being alone...the worst feeling ever. Heartbreaking poem, but wonderful. Every heart has hidden treasures...a secret wish, a silent dream, and a cherished love. [Unknown] |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thank you for reading this everyone! ![]() |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ah, for how many children this is the bitter bread everyday. You grasped the pain. Sad, but so well written! Love, Margherita |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thank you Margherita. It's eay to grab hold of things we know well. Like love....Pain. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Very emotional read---and written with so much conviction and truth. This was exceptionally well done!... Warm hugs, EA |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Thanks Angel! ![]() I am glad you liked it. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Albert, you are very right about one of your replies, in which you said, "It's easy to grab hold of things we know well. Like love....pain." Thank you for writing your heart and feelings. You are an excellent writer. Hugs, Ethel ![]() |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Albert...Painful to read, and yes, it touched my heart. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I've seen this scene so many times. Yours was a bit different though, as there appears to have been a father nearby. A poignant write, Albert. Hopefully, you are not feeling alone today. |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Ethel - Thank you and You are welcome!! Martie - I am glad i could touch your heart. Midnite - There was no father nearby. Just the other child who played in the yards father. That was why It was so lonely and sad. Thank you for reading. |
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