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Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-03-22 06:22 PM


May I play
the prodigal one?
will you lay feast
for my return
or turn me aside
once more

For I am
in desperate need
of illusions
self responsibility
a path too hard
to take

Take wafer
to bitten tongue
inebriation of thought
by chalice wine
I hunger and thirst
for more than truths

They leave
void in belly
sober my thoughts
and I need a little
white lie to help me
sleep again

For I am
in desperate need
of illusions
self responsibility
a path too hard
to take

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There is no intention to offend, I know there are those with strong beliefs here. I admire and respect your faith and am truly happy that you find solace in it. And I hope you can respect my lack of it. There's no returning home for this one and truly? I never would. It's not the faith I miss but the comfort of laying some of the weight on someone else.

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (03-22-2003 06:24 PM).]

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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling
1 posted 2003-03-22 06:26 PM


I once called myself an athiest, and then called myself weak for it, now I dont care what I am, as long as there is something bigger.Because if I am the strongest thing I know...............God help us.
Jason

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2003-03-22 06:32 PM


Very impressive, dear Raffaele.

Self responsibility a path too hard to take ... yes you say it, it is not easy. We all hunger and thirst for more than truth .... for love
May you find what you need.
Un abbraccio
Margherita

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...
3 posted 2003-03-22 06:40 PM


A thoughtful post...  I miss the ideals, personally...  Used to have so many of them.  Now it's just ordeals that surround me...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
4 posted 2003-03-22 09:40 PM


I can't say that I'm fully atheist, I'd say I'm a p***ed off agnostic. There's something that combines but i shy from putting a label on it

Margherita Un abbracio, very kind to say and I truly hope you find all that you wish for also

Mark well said I too am surrounded by ordeals

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
5 posted 2003-03-22 09:43 PM


this is how i see it,

even if she exists, there is something greater than her, that she sprang from too,

l'chaim...............

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
6 posted 2003-03-22 10:13 PM


Raph - there is always someone to lean on sweety - but yes I know this feeling well:

I need a little
white lie to help me
sleep again

and again and again . . . .  as always - amazing xxoo

Michele - she *thumbs up*

[This message has been edited by littlewing (03-22-2003 10:13 PM).]

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
7 posted 2003-03-22 11:25 PM


Mish i agree has to be a she, would explain why she ignores me

Thanks Sue its not for leaning purposes it's for void filling

wranx
Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
8 posted 2003-03-23 01:52 AM


It has always been my belief, that one can be a spiritual being, loving a G-d, and being loved in return, without the Sunday morning fashion show.

"The shortest distance between two points is.....sometimes intolerable"

~Bukowski~

majnu
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since 2002-10-13
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9 posted 2003-03-23 02:21 AM


nice piece.

your edge is very cool. too many people try to get it - you seem natural.

about your faith, or rather lack thereof, i get you completely.

but I am a physicist and believe me, the more you understand of the universe the more you see the order and the beauty, and then all of a sudden you realize you are thinking it couldn't all be coincidence.

you know why? because as a scientist you don't believe in coincidence.

i just go to sleep to prevent the thoughts - to time wasting .

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
10 posted 2003-03-23 01:56 PM


Thanks Ed and I agree with both this and your comment in insights

Majnu I feel the same, the deeper I delved the less random things seem if that makes sense..thanks for the compliment

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