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Denea Furr
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0 posted 2003-03-22 05:23 PM



i look up to my daddy
he is so intimidating
every week he has to work
but for the weekend he is waiting

all us kids are waiting too
for when he pulls up out in front
sometimes he is really cool
and pulls some insane stunt

we all go to his apartment
sometimes we go to the movies
my dad is a really cool guy
he always says the word groovy

when we wake up in the morning
we never want to go home
without daddy through the week
we always feel alone

but all through the week
we wait till saturday
we all get so excited
to know that daddys on the way

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-03-22 06:16 PM


WOW!!  Sounds like he's a pretty terrific Dad!
Isn't it great to have the weekends to look forward to?!
Much enjoyed the read.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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2 posted 2003-03-22 06:21 PM


So lovely .... your dad must be wonderful ... and he has reason to be gratified by your poem.

Love, Margherita

Midnitesun
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3 posted 2003-03-22 10:26 PM


So, the whole family is poetic AND happy too? That is so cool!   

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (03-22-2003 10:28 PM).]

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2003-03-22 10:30 PM


Denea Furr - enjoyed the read...

BC

WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
5 posted 2003-03-22 11:04 PM


Like father, like daughter, it seems. Enjoyed this write very much.
garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-03-22 11:14 PM


Denea, this is a very good poem
about your Dad. I'll bet he likes it,
too, doesn't he? It sounds like you all
have a lot of fun when you're together.


And, hey...it's cool to say "groovey"..LOL

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-03-24 03:03 AM


This is great...James
passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-03-24 03:15 AM


it's sad to have to live apart...but the relationship seems very strong...great write~
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