Open Poetry #25 |
papa |
Denea Furr Junior Member
since 2002-11-03
Posts 31Indiana |
i look up to my daddy he is so intimidating every week he has to work but for the weekend he is waiting all us kids are waiting too for when he pulls up out in front sometimes he is really cool and pulls some insane stunt we all go to his apartment sometimes we go to the movies my dad is a really cool guy he always says the word groovy when we wake up in the morning we never want to go home without daddy through the week we always feel alone but all through the week we wait till saturday we all get so excited to know that daddys on the way |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Sounds like he's a pretty terrific Dad! Isn't it great to have the weekends to look forward to?! Much enjoyed the read. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So lovely .... your dad must be wonderful ... and he has reason to be gratified by your poem. Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
So, the whole family is poetic AND happy too? That is so cool! [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (03-22-2003 10:28 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Denea Furr - enjoyed the read... BC |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Like father, like daughter, it seems. Enjoyed this write very much. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Denea, this is a very good poem about your Dad. I'll bet he likes it, too, doesn't he? It sounds like you all have a lot of fun when you're together. And, hey...it's cool to say "groovey"..LOL Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is great...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's sad to have to live apart...but the relationship seems very strong...great write~ |
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