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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2003-03-22 02:33 PM

I hold teardrops and serenades in my palm.
I wrote them out for you the day that you were gone.
They reflect a golden light, the slow and setting sun.
I hold teardrops and serenades in my palm.

I weigh teardrops and serenades in my palm.
They fell to earth to help me forget that you were gone.
They scratch the dusk and thread dragging storms through the dawn.
I weigh teardrops and serenades in my palm.

I hear teardrops and serenades in my palm.
They started showing whispers the moment you were gone.
They leave songs of broken hearts, and broken hearts of songs.
I hear teardrops and serenades in my palm.

Stella was a diver and she was always down.
Interpol

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-03-22 02:54 PM

Mike - this is lovely - an amazing lullaby to the one who owns your heart . . .

I wrote them out for you the day that you were gone.
They reflect a golden light, the slow and setting sun.

just beautiful - made me smile - wishing it wasnt so painful . . . xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (03-22-2003 02:55 PM).]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-03-22 02:54 PM

I felt the teardrops
and
heard this serenade.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (03-22-2003 02:55 PM).]

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2003-03-22 03:53 PM

I love your poem. "Teardrops and Sernades" what a lovely title.

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2003-03-22 04:17 PM

Wow. I really love what you're writing lately. There's a sweet edge to it. I hope you're ok?

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2003-03-22 04:56 PM

Mikey - it sounds like someone is really missing someone! Very much enjoyed although with a sad sigh. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2003-03-22 05:02 PM

Enjoyed...James

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-03-22 05:49 PM

Nice bsqr very nice

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2003-03-22 06:05 PM

A beautiful piece bsquirrel.

Maree

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2003-03-22 06:20 PM

Hauntingly beautiful Mike!
Much enjoyed the read.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

10 posted 2003-03-22 06:36 PM

Loved this, Mikey...

Sunkissed.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

11 posted 2003-03-22 10:07 PM

Thanks, all. Just listening to music.

Stella was a diver and she was always down.
Interpol

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