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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-03-21 09:01 PM

These sapphire skies lift my thoughts to you
So vast, a freedom that becomes my cosset
As cotton shadows changing shapes and capes
I miss you in the ticks of long and lost
As morn would stretch to catch the daybreak dew

Somehow my heart was stretched in un-sewn seam
Sometime ago, another dream, I left so surely empty
And silent to the self until your eyes conveyed surprised
I miss you in the ticks of long and lost
To ramble in the tremble of the leaves soft color scheme

And still, the shell pink drink of surfaced shy, by sky
So soft, that welcome that I hold in places, graces wide
As warm as fur to tender to, my body nestles in contented
I miss you in the ticks of long and lost
Where once the scope, by now the hope, in sapphire lullaby

Copyright Kkh 3/21/03

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (03-22-2003 11:04 AM).]

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

1 posted 2003-03-21 09:06 PM

I thoroughly enjoyed this. Great job.

~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one...
John Lennon

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-03-21 09:13 PM

Kathleen, this is beautiful. I
love the way you rhymed the
first and last line of each verse, too.

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

waldopepper
Member

since 2003-03-18

Posts 157
Tennessee, USA

3 posted 2003-03-21 10:03 PM

A virtual melody of words and lines. This sings with such a contented beauty I cannot imagine a more complete statement made. Very, very nice.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-03-21 10:07 PM

Oooh I love this Kathleen!
Simply beautiful!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

5 posted 2003-03-22 12:12 PM

You've got some great imagery wrapped upn this.

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

6 posted 2003-03-22 11:06 AM

This is so beautiful, it should be a book submission....

*hint-hint*

Sunkissed.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2003-03-22 11:09 AM

Music to my soul, a painting for my eyes, and a smile for my heart...

Peace & Love,
Linda

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-03-22 12:08 PM

soft like a whisper, and subtle like the premonition of color before the blazing sunset

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2003-03-22 12:19 PM

You speak to the heart of me you do.

Your poetry reads like a prism in the light
that sparkles so beautifully.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2003-03-22 12:26 PM

Thanks you guys...
I think quite highly of all of you, your many talents and gifts, and your friendship.
Smiles from TD

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