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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2003-03-21 08:02 PM


I thought I saw a statue cry
But I was wrong
I just caught my reflection
In a window

Gloom


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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2003-03-21 11:37 PM


just a quick read before I say goodnight...
reflections are often distorted...

M

WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
2 posted 2003-03-21 11:51 PM


This tugs at the heart strings gloomy. I hope all is well with you.
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3 posted 2003-03-22 12:01 PM


Professor, this is sad.
I also hope that all is well.  

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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4 posted 2003-03-22 12:04 PM


I can't tell you how many times I've scared the hell out of myself that way...

Hugs you. I observe your art of moment.

Chanson
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle
5 posted 2003-03-23 12:36 PM


I bet your other Four Hundred and Twenty Two
observations as just as captivating as this
image is. Let's hear them. *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

Amara
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East of the moon, west of the sun.
6 posted 2003-03-23 12:38 PM


I like the title. I, too, think I see things that aren't really there. Sometimes I DO see things that aren't really there, but that's a different story!

Beautiful image.

Every heart has hidden treasures...a secret wish, a silent dream, and a cherished love. [Unknown]

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-03-23 06:54 AM


Do you actually have all these observations written down in a book and catagorized...James
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2003-03-23 07:26 AM



Professor...
I did not know
my heart reflected just that...

smiling...

you do live up to your name...

I often picture you in an old sweater-jacket with a huge collar....

and in a small room with books lining shelves...

ah, I'm rambling...but enjoying the thoughts...

keep pulling these out....they are enlightening...

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