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Today Catch My Breath
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Today Catch My Breath |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Today Catch My Breath you opened the box of what we’ve all been through looking in I saw the tears and pain of you the kind of things we just keep sorting then again put away but you should know that life is not a rock it’s clay your dreams so beautiful they still can fly for air is not locked in a box breath still holds you in arms of sky |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Beautifully written! |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
the kind of things we just keep sorting then again put away but you should know that life is not a rock it’s clay we should know... beautifully done.. as usual the tight conruction and form lend themselves to the subject matter and float down the page for the readers eye to follow. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is beautiful. Eric |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yep! You're doing this "Helen" poetry, better and better. The "Float" of words you do. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Helen, this is beautiful, and the form really does add to the content. I enjoyed it very much..  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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waldopepper Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 157Tennessee, USA |
I agree, your presentation enhances the lovely message in your words. A most complete and delightful poem. Thanks for sharing. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Lovely Helen, in word and presentation. |
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