Open Poetry #25 |
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Hurry Spring |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio ![]() |
hurry spring, winter's swan song serenades the sleeping trees, in awakening lullabies, hurry spring, coat the branches bare, rain cries hard tonight, weaves an intricate design, hurry spring, meloncholy sigh, changing of the guard, planting summer dreams, hurry spring, baring skin, laughing toes, down the aisles, stepping deep in dafodils, hurry spring, evening news, pressing views, war hangs the world with despair, hurry spring, soar my spirits, slip me through underneath the shadowed moon, hurry spring, deep in dreams, surrendering to, the heavenly view, way beyond the starry night....... far away from here............ [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-21-2003 06:10 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
amen... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now I'm even more eager for spring to "hurry up" and get here! Until spring does finally arrive, may I join you in wandering the starry sky beyond the moon? Peace & Light, EA |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
winter's swan song serenades the sleeping trees, in awakening lullabies, This is just beautiful. I'm becoming a fan ![]() |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
yes Michele - far far away from here indeed . . . . xxoo |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I, too, posted for Spring afore I noted yours, but I like yours too. We cannot hope too hard for Spring to come. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
baring skin, laughing toes, down the aisles, stepping deep in dafodils, I love this part. Makes me think of dancing in the dafodils with my Love......baring skin..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Were you on vacation...didnt see you write for a day or so. Hurry spring.....sure why not....whats the difference between spring and winter in florida.......the snow birds go home...yippee!!!! Not so crowded for the early bird specials and less Camrys driving in the right lane with the left turn signal on.....did i mention the golf rates go down.....hurry spring! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i was here, saw you were too, send me more fla . oranges, and choc. kisses too ![]() |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
My compliments ... this is very well done. Subtle and meaningful. "Hurry Spring" ..... in the world and in our hearts! Love, Margherita |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - it arrived here this morning, must have been this poem that helped it come in... It's gorgeous here in the mountains... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You are the goddess of imagery that transcends a single thought while saying so much. I can't begin to pick and choose my favorite lines because I wouldn't want to leave one of them out. Good job girlielocks~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-22-2003 01:35 PM).] |
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