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bslicker
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state of mind

0 posted 2003-03-21 01:31 PM



Deadline

Deadline is near
but not repling
letting go life
known of time past
to let it all rest
with only days
of no fight left
but still wanting
never to foget
within the heart
it all still remains
strong with all my love
to you always
Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-03-21 01:33 PM


To me it sounds like an impending divorce or somehting emtotionally disturbing of that caliber. well done!
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2 posted 2003-03-21 02:29 PM


Bullseye Brad
Thanks for reading
Bernie

[This message has been edited by bslicker (03-21-2003 02:30 PM).]

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