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Of Rhymes and Times
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Of Rhymes and Times |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Of Rhyme and Time There are rhymes and there are rhymes. There are times and there are times. Thoughts that dash in cresting waves And those that crash in sandy graves. There’s no preserver where I swim You stay or drown upon a whim You laugh or cry upon a line Or hang forever from the vine. It is a search in shadows thin With breezes dancing on your skin Feelings swaying on the air Hits you when you’re least aware. Euphoria rides you on a phrase Blinds you in a daring daze. Gives you wings to soar on high For an instant you can fly. Intoxicating I confess The aphrodisiac success |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There are rhymes and there are rhymes. There are times and there are times. Thoughts that dash in cresting waves And those that crash in sandy graves. There’s no preserver where I swim You stay or drown upon a whim You laugh or cry upon a line Or hang forever from the vine. ================================= Intoxicating I confess The aphrodisiac success ================================= There are rhymes and then there are SY-guy rhymes ... and yours are the rhymes divine of sands of time. Trust me when I say they are so sweetly sublime ... I should know -- my library full makes them mine all mine. *L*  your Randy rhymes rock and it rolls me     |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Randy wants you to know as soon as spring is in the air he will fly there. Take you back to the ocean shore Find you shells to explore And let you shallow in the briney air. WWRS |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Dear Sy... You must dream in rhyme... and rhyme... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! Really?! Do you dream in rhyme? You must.  This is wonderful...so refreshing! ~Morning hugs & tea~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan I used to dream in rhythm, but not lately. LOL Nancy, Hugs back and thank you. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
way to turn a phrase! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Nice rite psai.....wish I could dream in rhythm....my dreams are awful....I once dreamed I was a school desk and some litte prick was carving his initials on my back........ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS Thanks for the read and comment. Toe, LOL you always have a clever comment. Thanks |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - Oh, my I am late to-day! I have a cold dear sir, and your morning write eases it with poetic words. Thankyou. Blueberry Muffins with our tea. hugs, Chris"Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Well you succeeded in making me smile. I love the last line, especially! Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Goood mooorning, Mr. T.! And how did we sleep last night?...Quite, well I trust!---another successful and intoxicating night of soaring on high, I see! I would love to experience such a sense of euphoria with my own turn of phrases whilst I slept! Thank you for yet another delightfully delicious treat to start my day! Peace & Love, Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Blueberry Muffins with our tea would be a delight. Pat, Hugs back my dear. Earth Angel You are not hard to please, thank you dear. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...from what I can see, you fly quite often.  |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
Actually, I was revisiting a recurring dream, once, and I thought I woke up and started writing it out in rhyme. Then I ACTUALLY woke up, and I was upset that I couldn't remember the dream anymore. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Glad to see you soaring today, Sy... say hey to the sky for me! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sy - this is amazing - brilliant description of what all of us have at one time or another - or even always xxoo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie By indulgence and request. LOL Eromyna I have done that, LOL thanks for the read. Sunshine It's not the sky, but the pie in the sky. littlewing Yes and I've lost so many lines to faulty memory. Thanks |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I love the fine timing of really good rhyming of stanza or sonnet from top of my bonnet Keep sharing your writing It's just so inviting And I'll keep on scribbling with hope no one's quibbling. Alway enjoy your work; it is a pleasure to read!! Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light [This message has been edited by kayjay (03-21-2003 01:18 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ken, It's a pleasure to have you read it. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) And there is clearly no remedy to the aphrodisiac, for goddesses should never be mistaken! (big hugggsssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, drink the wine from the vine and let time bellow rhyme, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Always a pleasure to read your comments, thank you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, better late than never, huh? I sure am glad I saw this delightful poem about what you do so well..... Your rhymes are always excellent, and I love reading them. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Ethel, |
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