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Open Poetry #25

just a plain old vent.

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-03-21 05:38 AM

Aboard yet so washed out
too far to float in
there is no wash line
to hang me dry
quietly breeding
multiplying death
the axe alight
sharp warm cut
precise demise.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-03-21 06:41 AM

Gemma - every line perfectly coined - like your on top but not - amazing xxoo

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

2 posted 2003-03-21 06:42 AM

I have days like this too. *s

"there is no wash line
to hang me dry"

The imagery this line
produces is quite stunning.

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-03-21 07:03 AM

sort of suspended here..good stuff

like the blonde shade, it seems familiar

i wont tell if u dont!!!!!!!!

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