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Open Poetry #25

senryu/haiku (20mar)

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

0 posted 2003-03-20 01:11 PM

Selfish gardener

planted tulips in a pot

Rabbits look elsewhere

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2003-03-20 01:17 PM

I guess I'm a selfish gardener, too, then, because I don't want the rabbits to munch my flowers.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

2 posted 2003-03-20 01:18 PM

Awww.. the poor bunnies! LOL I liked this, it made me smile

Tara

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

3 posted 2003-03-20 03:36 PM

We see colour and beauty...the rabbits see a meal...and I won't even mention those pesty squirrels!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2003-03-20 04:41 PM

Beautiful!!

Charisma

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-03-20 05:12 PM

Arthur, this is so cute. Did you give
the little bunny rabbits some grass or
carrots to eat? LOL

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2003-03-20 08:01 PM

nicely done... on the surface level a simple statement.. on another a comment on human nature and behavior

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2003-03-20 08:08 PM

This is so ding-dang adorable!

Peace & Light,
Earth Angel

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2003-03-20 09:55 PM

Delightful read. Thanks for the smile.
ThisDiamond

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