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Breaking Away (TERZA RIMA)
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Breaking Away (TERZA RIMA) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
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In the Piptalk Lounge, IcyFlamez89 did a post called "What Poetry Form Are You?". You take a quiz and it comes up with a form of poetry.. I was a Terza Rima. I never heard of this form before so I looked it up. (http://www.geocities.com/Area51/Labyrinth/7091/plessons/fmisc.html if ya wanna take a look) I took a look and decided to try it, even though rhyming is a scary concept for me... rhyming is NOT my friend LOL. With that said.. here is my attempt at a Terza Rima. Breaking Away A low heavy sigh Is all you can hear She tries not to cry She can feel the spear A jab of despise Love bounds her to here She lowers her eyes Wants to get away Break the holding ties Born to a new day Strength rebuilding Light through fading gray "wake me up inside call my name and save me from the dark" -Bring Me To Life by Evanescence [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (03-20-2003 01:13 PM).] |
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j0n4th4n Member
since 2003-03-11
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a valiant effort! |
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