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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA 
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I can do naught but what I believe encounter and challenge what's given to me choose to embrace or denounce each thought defending those bastions of theory I wrought or tear them apart, foundations and up raise my grey palm to strike aside the silver cup I choose what poisons to put in my mind and maybe I'm a fool for that but you'll be too, if you believe that everything you're told is fact Man can naught but question each statement he is fed or else he claims to know it all Then he can tutor me instead "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." [This message has been edited by Eromyna (03-20-2003 11:03 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You are wise beyond your years... Well stated! Peace & Love, Earth Angel |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
very deep verse here! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We are each individual in our beliefs...this is a good write, I believe this one came from some deep thought... I would also like to thank you for leaving your comment on "Saying Goodbye". Thank goodness we have our archives, where you can read more about Madame Chipmunk, and all she brought to Passions...it's a good read, trust me...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Eromyna Clever write, enjoyed the read. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Very clever. Enjoyed the read of this.  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
As a position statement, well done! Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I really liked this  Tara "wake me up inside |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Much enjoyed the read! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
I felt your anguish but sorry, i was chuckling as i read....do you have a self-deprecating sense of humour as well? I choose what poisons to put in my mind I like this line...Ohhh, the attitude!  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ero - you are an amazing writer - much philosophy here - made me question mysekf - this is awesome - you have a life of amazing writes ahead of you . . . xxoo |
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