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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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Within This grave and very black night When I am filled with concern For the sons and daughters of man I am taken back to another time When nights were black And no less grave I was anxious for the well being Of one mans son (coward) Did I really hope that the outcome Would be the end of “god” politic? Or merely Spout the rhetoric of dissent As an inroad to cheap wine And feverish young women I took such pride In being gassed and dragged And jailed Now, on this night I really do hope that these days Will be the de-clawing of religiosity But, find myself without fustian shout Oversweet wine Or adolescent acquiescent (coward) Nor, have any interest In being reviled and abused I’ll need to find my peace tonight Within [This message has been edited by wranx (03-20-2003 08:32 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
((((within))))) smile. only place it happens to be.... *yeti*hugs* |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ED - may you find your peace: I was anxious for the well being Of one mans son (coward) strong words - be good to yourself xxoo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'm just plain anxious! Peace to you good poet. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The "Within of Wranx" is a very special place... Peace & Love, Linda |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
wranx "I’ll need to find my peace tonight Within" Can relate to this, as many do, I'm sure. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A very intense write dear wranx. No surprise though, cause you sure do look intense in that pic  I hope that you find peace dear friend. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Thank you for the look within... Peace to you. ~Hugs~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Powerful write.. I did enjoy it Tara "wake me up inside |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'Did I really hope that the outcome Would be the end of “god” politic? Or merely Spout the rhetoric of dissent As an inroad to cheap wine And feverish young women' We...and the times have changed. Enjoyed Ed. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Amen brother.. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Will be the de-clawing of religiosity You knew i'd pull this one out didn't you? Loved this. Ed your words always imprint themselves on me, thanks for writing |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Intense emotions grace this page... It matters not the reality, but the truth that it becomes. Good Journey. TD |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 I just got home...have been at work since Monday, nonstop, due to the blizzard here. What a mess. Vous dites la verite ici. I wish you PEACE of mind, and safety. I understand this one all too well. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Damn! you are giving me writers block again!, sometimes writers like you and Raph just intimidate the hell out of me! Jason [This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (03-21-2003 03:55 PM).] |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
damn, ed you made me cry...call me a coward too...for i am strong and i am weak...and i am lost in vocabulary looking for peace...and the answers behind the words to not have it...helen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, how much I understand this thought, written so accurately. Peace dreams..we must stil keep them. Sandra |
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