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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2003-03-19 10:20 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * * *

I feel like I'm in heaven
When I'm in your warm embrace
You are the very reason
For the smile that lights my face

If I had a crystal ball
Into forever I would see
But I know without question
You and I were meant to be

The love I have for you
Is simply beyond measure
For the times we spend together
Are filled with pure pleasure

Your love flows through my veins
Moving through my blood supply
I feel as graceful as a bird
For you've given me wings to fly
* * * *


"There is nothing holier
in this life of ours,
than the first consciousness of love,
the first fluttering
of its silken wings."




I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

[This message has been edited by Suetang (03-19-2003 10:42 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-03-19 10:33 PM


Very beautiful words. I just loved it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-03-19 11:29 PM


This is beautiful, Sue. I love it...

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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3 posted 2003-03-20 04:24 AM


Sue - you know I love angels and wings:

"There is nothing holier
in this life of ours,
than the first consciousness of love,
the first fluttering
of its silken wings."

Nothing at all can compare to that feeling - always so happy when I read you TY xxoo  

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2003-03-20 04:51 AM


Now I'm thinking about that song.  "Heaven, I'm in heaven.  And my heart beats so that I can hardly speak...When we're out together dancing cheek to cheek"...James
Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-03-22 08:25 PM




(smiles) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, and as Bette Midler sings, may love always be the "wind beneath your wings"! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, you always write the most romantic poetry, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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