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Open Poetry #25

Sweet Surrender

Rdz9
Member

since 2003-03-16

Posts 142
MT, USA

0 posted 2003-03-20 12:22 PM

I fear i have no choice left, my friend
for i could never let this end
i believe i care for you to much
to risk loosing your simple touch
to never again see your eyes
open wide in glad surprise
to feel my heart skip a beat
from just your simple body heat
i fear i'm captive of loves many wars
now i see only one cell door
my heart it is a prisinor,
only to you, my greatest friend
only to you, will it ever surrend.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2003-03-20 06:42 AM

Enjoyed...James

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

2 posted 2003-03-20 07:37 AM

This is most surely pulling on my heartstrings......for these are words I long to hear from a certain someone!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-03-20 08:39 AM

Yes, indeed! A lovely poem on "sweet surrender"...

Peace & Light,
Earth Angel

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-03-20 08:44 AM

This is a very good poem. I relate to it, too,
because my Love is also my best friend. He and
I became riends before we fell madly in
love. I have found that's the best way. We
know each other better than either of us
have known anyone else in our whole lives.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

Rdz9
Member

since 2003-03-16

Posts 142
MT, USA

5 posted 2003-03-20 09:57 AM

Thank you all, I owe thanks to SlvrTryst for giving me the topic.

Silver_Tryst
Member

since 2003-03-10

Posts 64
MT

6 posted 2003-03-20 11:03 PM

Another Great Write Rdz9....Enjoyed

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

7 posted 2003-03-21 12:38 PM

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!

Rdz9
Member

since 2003-03-16

Posts 142
MT, USA

8 posted 2003-04-09 06:37 PM

Is "surrend" a word?

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